The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008.
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The map illustrates, the museum plan in 1998 and after some renovation happened in 2008.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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a huge difference occurs in
this
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10 years gap. There is no difference in the areas of permanent exhibition rooms and ticket entrance exit
To begin
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with, the
center
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portion has still a garden
area
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with an
additional
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of
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apply
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a
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apply
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cafe sitting
area
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and fountain in the 2008 map. In 1998 the right
side
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of the southeast
side
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was occupied with a shop, wc, bags and coats.
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, in 2008, it is shifted to the left
side
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of the southwest
area
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except wc. it is moved to the north
side
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above the garden. They reduce the square feet of the
area
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of the cafe in 2008.
In addition
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to
this
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, a restaurant
build
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right next to the cafe in the present year.
To add
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on, the temporary exhibition room situated
in
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on
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the left downside in the year 1998 shifted to
westside
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the westside
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in 2008.
As a result
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, the right
side
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become
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becomes
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totally free space in the map of 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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