Government investment in the arts such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?
The arts and public
services
are both essential parts of human lives. Use synonyms
Government
investing in musicians and actors is a form of mismanagement of public funds rather Use synonyms
this
should be put in the latter. I think there should be a balanced Linking Words
investment
because the arts are good sources of livelihood for some people and public Use synonyms
services
Use synonyms
also
provide basic amenities for human existence. These facts will be Linking Words
further
discussed with relevant examples and a logical conclusion.
Linking Words
To begin
with, music and theatre are greatly entertaining Linking Words
as well as
jobs for some people. The Linking Words
government
supporting the entertainment industry will lead to its advancement Use synonyms
as well as
create work for its citizens. Linking Words
For instance
, building good general music studios and theatre villages, Linking Words
therefore
enabling young artists to be productive, earn a decent living and pay tax Linking Words
thus
, contributing to the financial growth of the country. Linking Words
Furthermore
, music and movies could be therapeutic as they are usually inculcated into the treatment of sick people as a form of diversional therapy for those suffering from depression and terminal disease conditions.
Linking Words
Government
Use synonyms
investment
in public Use synonyms
services
can never be over-emphasized. Use synonyms
This
is because the lack of a good healthcare system will negatively affect the citizens Linking Words
likewise
the economy of the nation. Linking Words
For example
, building and equipping hospitals with the necessary facilities, facilitate quick access to health and treatment of sick individuals. Linking Words
In addition
, the availability of good roads, electricity, etc, will encourage Linking Words
investment
by foreign investors which will provide job opportunities and Use synonyms
consequently
improve the resources of the country.
In conclusion, Linking Words
Government
Use synonyms
investment
in the arts is not a waste of resources but is as important as investing in public Use synonyms
services
. Some individuals depend on singing and acting as the source of their income. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, hospitals, roads and electricity enhance human lives and cause an improvement in the country's finances. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
should be prioritised and public Linking Words
services
should be hugely invested in.Use synonyms
Submitted by oludayotemilade on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.