The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart compares the amount of money spent on various consumer products in the
UK
and Use synonyms
France
in 2010.
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It is clear that
the proportion of spending on cars was noticeably high in both countries over the year givenLinking Words
,
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while
spending on perfumes was the lowest among all. Linking Words
Also
, French residents spent a larger amount of their budgets on computers than British people.
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To begin
with, 450,000 Linking Words
pounds
of Use synonyms
UK
residents’ budget went on cars, Use synonyms
while
the equivalent figure for French people was just 400,000 Linking Words
pounds
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, spending on books in the Linking Words
UK
and Use synonyms
France
was 400000 Use synonyms
pounds
and 300000 Use synonyms
pounds
, respectively. In the Use synonyms
UK
, expenditure on cameras, with over 350000 Use synonyms
pounds
, was over double that of Use synonyms
France
which was only 150,000 Use synonyms
pounds
.
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On the other hand
, the amount of money spent on the remaining products was far higher in Linking Words
France
. In 2010, expenditure on computers in Use synonyms
France
overtook the other country, with a difference of almost 200,000 Use synonyms
pounds
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the figure for perfume goods in Linking Words
France
accounted for 200000 Use synonyms
pounds
of French residents’ budget, Use synonyms
while
the expenditure on Linking Words
this
in the Linking Words
UK
was lower, about less than 150,000 Use synonyms
pounds
.Use synonyms
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