The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart compares the amount of money spent on various consumer products in the
UK
and France
in 2010.
It is clear that
the proportion of spending on cars was noticeably high in both countries over the year given,
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while
spending on perfumes was the lowest among all. Also
, French residents spent a larger amount of their budgets on computers than British people.
To begin
with, 450,000 pounds
of UK
residents’ budget went on cars, while
the equivalent figure for French people was just 400,000 pounds
. Moreover
, spending on books in the UK
and France
was 400000 pounds
and 300000 pounds
, respectively. In the UK
, expenditure on cameras, with over 350000 pounds
, was over double that of France
which was only 150,000 pounds
.
On the other hand
, the amount of money spent on the remaining products was far higher in France
. In 2010, expenditure on computers in France
overtook the other country, with a difference of almost 200,000 pounds
. Similarly
, the figure for perfume goods in France
accounted for 200000 pounds
of French residents’ budget, while
the expenditure on this
in the UK
was lower, about less than 150,000 pounds
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