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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where did they training, others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Doctors and
engineers
 are the backbone of the society we live.
However
, people are divided on whether they should be allowed to work anywhere in the world or should be limited to the origin from where they acquired the knowledge. In my opinion, specialists should be eligible to practice their profession in another country based on the below discussion. People who believe
such
 experts should be limited to their home country that because of the assumptions they have regarding the code of conduct pro follow, and the difference in the course syllabus they went through. Sometimes media fuels these misconceptions by focusing on the failures of non-native doctors and
engineers
.
For example
, the incident of the bridge collapse was because of corruption,
,
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 media reported
engineers
 as a culprit for the accident.
On the other hand
, people who believe that these professional are free to work anywhere in the world has a different mindset. They are aware of the regulating bodies in different countries, and these
professionals
 must pass through a rigorous process to become licenced
professionals
. Professional
Engineers
 of Ontario is one of the examples from many regulating bodies for
professionals
 in Canada. In conclusion, if
professionals
 are authorized by regulating body, and if their level of education fulfils the requirement of the country's authorized organization
then
 they should be free to work anywhere in the world if they wish to do so.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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