Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures

It is universally acknowledged that

children

are bearing extreme

pressure

in terms of study, society and

commercially

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. There are several negative consequences of

this

trend and some measures can be taken to resolve

this

issue. There are numerous of why

children

are facing

pressure

in

this

modern era, and the prominent one is they have to compete with other

students

.

This

is because they have to score high in academics

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so that they can get

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admission

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one of the eminent colleges. In

this

competitive world,

students

are mainly being pushed by

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family members to show off the society. To illustrate, 20% of the

students

are suffering from mental health issues in India

such

as depression since they cannot tolerate

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family

pressure

.

However

, certain effective actions could be taken in order to tackle

this

menace.

Firstly

, parents must encourage

children

to choose the subjects on their own and

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cooperative towards them. When

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children

choose their favourite subject to study, they are responsible for the scores without any guilt or

pressure

.

For instance

,

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have come down

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70% to 50% in India

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the

last

two years since parents do not indulge themselves in

academic

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area

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of

students

.

Secondly

, awareness camps can

be organise

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for the

students

and parents to build a better relationship, and how they can interact with each other when facing

the

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any

pressure

. In conclusion, various remedies can be posed in order to deal

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problematic situation of

children

going through the difficult situation

such

as study and social

pressure

.