Reducing global environment damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent agree or disagree?

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global
environment
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destruction should be taken care of by
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leaders rather than citizens. The
previous
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stated phrase is something that
personnally
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personally
I agree with. The global
environment
is something that should be
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the governments
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governments
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responsability
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responsibility
.
However
, I
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understand
why some people
my
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have a different opinion regarding
this
topic and that
this
is partly
individual's
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responsability
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responsibility
. Personally, I think that
govenments
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governments
are the
ones
accused
for
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environment
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destruction for two particular reasons.
Firstly
,
governancies
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governance
governances
are the
ones
which take the most
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advantage
in
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some practices that harm the
environment
,
such
as oil extraction, mining and deforestation.
Secondly
, in my view, some
world
leaders aren't concerned about damaging our environments and surroundings and they only care about making significant amounts of money for their own benefit.
Therefore
, it seems to me that
govenmets
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governments
government
should take
responsablity
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responsibility
for the
environment
since they are the
ones
who most affect it.
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the other hand, I believe that
indiviuals
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individuals
should
also
partly take liability when mentioning
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environments
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damage. Certainly, there are various countries around the
world
in which their society
don't
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carry any burden on their
souroundings
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surroundings
. They take actions
such
as
thowing
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throwing
trash
in
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the floor or on the street, and
this
goes on from generation to generation.
Although
this
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actions have a negative impact
in
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the
environment
, it isn't significant enough to cause
a
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symbolic damage.
To sum up
,
indiviuduals
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individuals
have a
responsablity
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responsibility
to be
concious
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conscious
of their actions and how they affect the planet, despite
this
, their impact is almost insignificant in
comparassion
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comparison
compassion
of
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how
world
govenments
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governments
affect the Earth. In my point of view,
world
leaders should be the
ones
taken accountable for watching over the
environment
.
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