In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. does this development has have more advantages or more disadvantages ?
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some people argue that it provides numerous benefits, others claim that it has several drawbacks. Both aspects, along with
relevant justifications, are explained in the ensuing paragraphs.
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leaks
As a consequence
, individuals might have to suffer from financial loss.
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, despite the problems such
as information leak and financial loss when making a payment
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...