In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. does this development has have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

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globalization,

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of technological devices in

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routine life is increased significantly. In many nations,

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of cellular devices as a mode of

payment

became part of daily life.

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some people argue that it provides numerous benefits, others claim that it has several drawbacks. Both aspects,

along with

relevant justifications, are explained in the ensuing paragraphs. Analyzing the brighter side of using mobiles. The foremost argument

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would like to put forward is ease of

payment

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everything became online,

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of shops, malls ,and even small vendors

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access to the internet; and through

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it is very easy to accept online payments for shopkeepers and business owners.

As a result

, individuals do not need to keep cash or physical cards with them in order to make a

payment

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it

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provides

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of

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as anything

that is

on

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is password protected.

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finances much easier and safer to carry globally.

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, paying through

cellphone

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has certain downfalls as well.

To begin

with,

mobile

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application increases

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the chances

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of leakage of personal information. To illustrate, as more and more apps are becoming available on mobile phones;

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and data

leak

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leaks

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can happen quite frequently by hackers over the internet.

As a consequence

, individuals might have to suffer from financial loss.

To conclude

, despite the problems

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as information leak and financial loss when making a

payment

using mobiles, its benefits like ease of use; and having

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of

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more importance. As

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by using strong passwords for online transactions and through the

security

softwares

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software

leaking of information can be avoided.