An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

We are living in a comfortable world thanks a large part to technology. It cannot be denied that many traditional ways of study
such
books
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and other printed
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have been replaced by digital devices for the good sake of
students
. In
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essay, I will outline what I consider to be the advantages and negative consequences of
such
development. Certain features of digital devices tend to induce convenience. The most significant one is that the abundant database can be accessed anytime from anywhere.
This
allows
students
to search the reference for their assignment at home,
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in
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or in class whenever time works. More importantly, presenting a good format of exams and
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another beneficial factor. When compared to what people composed essays in the past, it is obvious that they now can be organised in
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way. Teachers have no longer encountered the deep scratched lines or multiple
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correction inks in final writing papers,
as a result
of using computer-based typing software. Provided that it is
such
beneficial, in my view, it may lead to several disadvantages. It can reduce youth's concentration. Rather than using
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for doing
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,
students
often do something else with it
such
as playing
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or chatting with friends, resulting in missing
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of essay submission. Another issue is that plentiful sources of information available
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computers discourage
students
to brainstorm for better
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. The more
students
depend on it, the less innovative they are. In conclusion, as technology is changing timely, schools must adapt new
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to support convenient study even though it still has some downsides to overcome.
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