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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables demonstrate the students who transferred to
Australia
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 from Europe and vice versa for higher studies. The figures are given for the
years
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 2007 and 2009. As a whole, there has been an upsurge in the trend of European educatees who travelled to
Australia
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 from 186 to 226. Most importantly, an equal number of Australian students have selected European universities for tertiary education which has been recorded as 152 in both
years
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. Basically, the highest number of collegians who have exchanged to
Australia
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 has been recorded from France in 2007, meanwhile, matriculants from Germany have been reported as the lowest.
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, there was an escalation of German educatees in 2009 from 27 to 63.
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, pupils from the United Kingdom transferred the least in 2009. Most significantly, the number of students who have travelled from the Netherlands has been stable for both
years
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.
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, France collegians exchanged to Oceania the most both in 2007 and 2009.
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, 18 has been exhibited as the minimum figure for the two
years
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 from Germany and the Netherlands respectively.
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, in 2007, 32 matriculants from the United Kingdom and the Netherlands exchanged to
Australia
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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