You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

Dear Mr .Smith, I would like to bring to your attention one
course
which is online available .
This
course
is a training
course
on the Calypso application where anyone
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his skills in the investment banking domain . The
course
can be completed within 36 hours. It is a self-learning
course
with audiovisuals. The
course
will help in upskilling domain knowledge and be useful in working for the treasury section . If
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Trasurey section employees
will be
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taught about
this
course
then
their productivity will be enhanced and we will keep a close tab on Fx transactions and accounting.
Therefore
, I
request
you please approve my
request
for
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course
at Calypso. I had gone through company policies regarding online courses. As per policies a company can sponsor online courses worth 250 $ with the manager's approval. So , again, I
request
you to consider my
request
for approval of the online
course
. Yours Sincerely, Neil Johnson
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coherence cohesion
Please ensure that the information is well-structured and presented in a logical sequence.
coherence cohesion
Give more attention to the salutation and closing of the letter to create a professional tone.
task achievement
Focus on addressing the prompt directly and providing all necessary details to fully respond to the task.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Training course
  • Useful
  • Manager
  • Details
  • Topics covered
  • Importance
  • Benefits
  • Work
  • Company
  • Help
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