The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The line graph illustrates the three methods of requesting advice at a tourist office in the United Kingdom during the first six months of the year.
Overall
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, there has been a rise in the number of people asking for useful data in person or by telephone, and a decrease in requesting by telephone.
However
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, the increment is more significant for the category ‘in person’ compared to ‘by telephone’, throughout the first half of the year. In
January
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, less than 600 tourists asked for instructions in person,
while
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the other 2 methods of requesting information were more popular, starting from 600 and above. The increase ‘in person’ was steady, with the steepest spike occurring between March and February, where it reached figures approximately 4 times than that in
January
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travelers
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asking by ‘letter or email’ decreased relatively steadily throughout the 6 months, where the number in June is almost half of that in
January
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.
On the other hand
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, fluctuations can be seen in the section ‘by telephone’. The figures decreased from
January
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to February and surged again in March. There were no changes between March and April. From April to June, the rate of increase in
this
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category was nearly the same as those enquiring about advice in person, hitting 1600 in June.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words january with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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