Some people say that art subject such as painting and drawing should not be made compulsory for highschool students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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high
school
in many countries, there is a point saying that teenagers do not need to spend time learning these. I personally believe that every subject has
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importance. I partly
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agree
with the statement because of both benefits and drawbacks of teaching
art
subject
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to high
school
students
.
To begin
with, there is no refutation
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studying is advantageous to some extent. The first benefit is that
art
classes are of
form
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of
recrational
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recreational
activities
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for pupils. If these
students
only concentrate on academic
subjects
, they are likely to experience stress or
depressed
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.
For example
, learners need to learn 10 or more different academic
subjects
in High
school
.
Additionally
, putting
art
classes as
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into
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the
school
could help to discover talents.
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, it is better for these people
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art
instead
of stressful
academy
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subjects
.
In addition
to,
art
subjects
in high
school
can bring some negative effect effects on
students
.
Firstly
, High academy
students
might have no time for other important
subjects
such
as mathematics or languages if
arts
subjects
are compulsory.
For example
, in Asian countries,high
school
students
have to take three main
subjects
including maths, science,
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in the exam, which requires
students
to put much effort into these
subjects
.
Secondly
, it would be tough for those who are not interested in
arts
subjects
to stay
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on the lecture.
Therefore
,
this
could be a waste of time and money. In conclusion, teaching
arts
such
as painting or drawing could bring both positive and negative effects on
students
.
However
,
school
authorities should open
art
classes for children to entertain them but not be made compulsory
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