Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent decades, electronics and

computer

games

bring many effects to our lives. Some groups hold the view that adolescents can discover beneficial

skills

by playing electronic and

computer

games

,

while

the other groups believe that it wasted their

time

. In

this

essay, I side with those who feel that playing electronic and

computer

games

brings more

skills

to

pre-teens

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live. On the one hand, teenagers can use their

time

wisely with more beneficial activities rather than playing electronic and

computer

games

, so that they can learn new things through play. To illustrate, playing

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music

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instrument in childhood

time

brings many benefits especially useful

skills

such

as coordination and patience.

Additionally

, playing electronics and

computer

games

give a great number of negative effects to themselves if they do for a long period.

For instance

, if preschoolers do gaming for a of couple hours, they tend to have a health problem namely experiencing sore eyes.

However

, I believe that coordination and patience are not gained only by playing music instrumental and young people can use glasses to overcome the problems.

On the other hand

, dealing with electronic and

computer

games

gives many favourable

skills

for

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youth. They will have

a

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good critical thinking when playing a game. If adolescents deal with one of the

computer

games

, namely harvest moon, it will sharpen their critical thinking. Toddlers will learn how to organize

the

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things and how to make a strategy to win a game.

Moreover

, it will encourage speaking

skills

in pre-teens by watching programs on handled gadgets or computers. To illustrate, BBC Kids requires

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shows on prime

time

. When young people watch their programs, they will imitate what they see. By seeing those programs, the youngsters will learn how to speak in a good way.

To conclude

,

while

dealing with electronics and

computer

games

is less beneficial than playing music and brings health problems, there are several useful

skills

such

as critical thinking and speaking

skills

.

Therefore

, on balance, I remain firmly convinced that the former can give a great number of advantageous

skills

for adolescents.