The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular buildings has changed over time.

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The tables display the changes in the
ground
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floor construction from 1958 to the present.
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, there are some noticeable additions,
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as the building’s features and the designs each time. In the first year, the
ground
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floor was built with various sectors like offices, a meeting
room
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, a reception, a toilet, and a kitchen on both sides of the building;
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, a toilet and a secretary’s office had reconstructed into a large bathroom and shower area for staff in the Southwest,
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a large living
room
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had rebuilt from a meeting
room
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and an assistant’s office in the period between 1985 and 2000. The reception section and a manager
room
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were
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converted into double bedrooms on the right-hand side, except for the kitchen was still remained relatively untouched. At
this
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time, the
ground
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floor is used to do an apartment. In the final period from 2001 to the present, the
ground
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floor’s feature is selling flowers;
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, the accommodation areas were removed to an office and a flower garden in the Southeast, and the living
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and shower area have relocated to gift cards selling area, a flower section, a kid’s playground.
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