In the running days, some people believe that traveling under the supervision of tour guide is the best approach as compared to going alone for tourorism. I partially agree with this point of view as traveling in a group with an expert and going alone has its own pros and cons.

There is no doubt that these days it could be argued that travelling lonely puts the tourist

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particuler

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particular

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and it is essential to travel with an expert who

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the place.

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disagree with the point that being alone is much better. I do believe that someone should be there to denote the unknown area and provide

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needed.

To begin

with, it is evident that the new generation has its own methods to explore lands and places that

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would like to visit.

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,

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to the significant thrives of

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technology as nowadays people use google maps and websites to browse

instead

of having a

tour

guide

.

Additionally

, travelling alone

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usually suites friends and adventurous people who prefer discovering new areas

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that there are sometimes and

sitiuations

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situations

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that

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a person would prefer

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without a

tour

guide

. To illustrate

this

point, it is not

nesscesery

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ness every

to get the

assits

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from experts if a person is going

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a honeymoon or a short holiday for a hard-working person.

On the other hand

, it is worth considering that visiting a

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foreign

country for the first time obviously requires having someone to indicate crucial places

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for families. To clarify

this

, they will be looking for

spicific intertainment

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specific entertainment

areas

such

as parks,

restuarants

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restaurants

and

musuems

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museums

.

Furthermore

, the

tour

guide

can help them to know where are the

emergancy

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emergency

places like health

ficilities

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facilities

and

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for the best hotel for them

as well as

shopping malls.

To conclude

,

it is clear that

the importance of having a

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tour

depends on a tourist's

sitiuation

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situation

and what he is seeking

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in his travel.