The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last

year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40

years.
The infographics illustrate average rainfall by month for the
last
40 years, including
last
year in Australia.
Overall
, there are two trends visible: the bar chart
as well as
the line graph have the same trend with
the
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most winter
months
showing the highest numbers, and
conversely
to
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most autumn
months
. Patterns of rainfall remained the same
within
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for
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four decades. In 1982, January showed 80 mm of rain, which
hitted
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a peak,
similarly
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to
last
year.
However
, the rain volume slightly dropped by one-tenth. March, May, June, and November have
showed
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slight
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a slight
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jump in comparison with the previous years.
Nevertheless
,
majority
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the majority
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of
months
outlined a plummet. The most change took place in October, significantly declining by around 15%. December is an exception to the winter trend,
while
March is an exception for the spring season
due to
the substantial difference from
consequent
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months
. The lowest raindrops were enrolled in September, October, and August—around 10%.
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