Today, more and more people use robots to do task at home and at work, do u think it is a positive or negay develop? Why?

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of technology is becoming increasingly popular amongst
people
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. Nowadays, a large number of
people
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prefer the
use
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of
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robot
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robots
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at home
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their
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place of
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, in my opinion, it is a positive development as the positivity outweighs the
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impacts because it saves
energy
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time
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. My points will be
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explained in the forthcoming paragraphs. Machines are devices that are created by humans to make
work
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easier,
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, the development of
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robot
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used by
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people
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is a means of saving
energy
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as robots perform tasks that are supposed
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carried out by humans thereby saving
people
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from
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stress
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the stress
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that could make them
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be worn out. Most
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the
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of
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nowadays are linked to
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, deriving and another means to
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alleviate
and reduce
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is a good development as
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will reduce the rate of illnesses caused by
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.
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, a woman who has just
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to bed and has no relative or helper around her could venture into the
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of
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robot
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a robot
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to run errands for her around the house thereby saving her conserving her
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for taking care of her baby.
Energy
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is
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request
in carrying out all activities as
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a robot
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robot
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could save
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energy
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from
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exhausted.
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, management of
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is required in achieving tasks, the
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of
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robot
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helps to
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time
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as
people
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could result
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role conflict if there is no help in carrying out their daily activities.
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Robot
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help
work
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to be done faster,
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, a boss at
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who has many roles to carry out
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as monitoring of
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, verification of documents etc can assign one or two of these roles to be carried out by
robot
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so as to safe
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and have several works to be done within a short period of
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thereby increasing productivity.
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,
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robot
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has its own disadvantages as it requires maintenance and
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create
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unemployment.
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, the creation of
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which is a positive impact has
save
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a lot of
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from physical and mental drainage as robots
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them to save their
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,
in addition
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, it
also
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ensures tasks are been carried out faster which results
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effectiveness in delivery of services.

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