Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public Services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Funding music and theatre by the authority is a waste of resources as some
people
are of the opinion that these funds can be used for public innovations. I strongly agree with
this
as it will bring about National and economic development and the majority of the population will benefit greatly. I will explain these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion will be drawn.
Firstly
, the allocation of resources in every country must be equal in a way that other sectors of the economy will not suffer inefficiency. The Government's expenses on
arts
alone are not a priority compared to focusing on funding the educational sector of the economy as
one
of the public Services to be ventured into which will later give them access to study any course of their choice and the nation's economy will be boosted through
this
. To illustrate, when a well-equipped institution is in place for
people
to study,
arts
will be
one
of the department
people
with an interest in music and other creative writing and drama will belong
while
other departments for
people
in sciences and social sciences will as well benefit from and not just
Arts
alone.
Moreover
, another public Service the government can fund that all and sundry will benefit from is Hospital.
For example
, every citizen desires to enjoy provisions from the government and adequate health care equipment, structures and good hands in terms
one
professional can not be overemphasized. The country needs all these than concentration on
Arts
alone because ,without good health of the populace, there won't be any entertainment of interest to them.
In addition
, "health is wealth" and everybody wants to enjoy it to the fullest but in a case where it is been focused on
one
area, it gets exhausting. In conclusion,
generally
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show examples
Arts
are good for our society because it
also
contributes to a healthy lifestyle, but must not be prioritized over general Services like schools and Hospitals in order to experience massive development peaceful nation.
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