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Some of the schools insist that all students have their own laptop in class to assist in their education. What are the advantages of this? What are the disadvantages of this.

Laptops
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 are amazing for education in some
schools
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 and colleges,
laptops
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 are famous in some countries , and they sell them for their students to
use
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 for
school
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. There are some advantages and disadvantages for them to
use
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 their own
laptops
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 in
schools
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.
First,
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the advantages of using the
laptop
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 in
school
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 in
this
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way
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 the student can save their work on their own
laptop
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, and look for a difficult word. Sometimes the
school
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 gives an assignment online in
this
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way
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 everyone should have their own
laptop
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 to
use
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 and do their work.
However
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 , if the
school
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 sometimes wants them to solve an exam they need to have their
laptops
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 to
use
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 it. On the other
way
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 not only
schools
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use
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laptops
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 but
also
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 colleges, because
laptop
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 is mandatory to
use
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 in every place. In
this
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 case , everybody must have their own pc to
use
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 . The teachers in some
case
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 want to show their pupils their work on their own
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laptop
Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
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. So
laptops
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 are important for
schools
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 these years the students have to bring their
laptops
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 with them.
However
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, there are some disadvantages to everyone using their own
laptops
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. The first disadvantage is that people taking an exam can solve the exam as they can open another page to cheat and copy-paste the answer into the question
that is
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 given.
Also
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, the others can cheat on
this
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 person
while
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 they are answering the question. In
this
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way
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 the teachers can't control anyone from doing
this
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 thing, so the
schools
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 have to put rules in place in order not to bring their own
laptops
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 for these cases, to discourage cheating , or even to give answers to others. The
schools
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 have to control
this
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 situation in order not to let everyone get a bad grade because of cheating online.
In other words
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,
schools
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 have to show the world the other
way
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 of teaching without using
laptops
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 anymore.
To conclude
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, the
laptops
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 are a good option ,not a bad option.
Laptops
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 are better for those who don't study either in
school
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 or college. Hopefully, the
schools
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 can control the situation and not allow people to
use
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 their own
laptops
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.

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