Students today can access information online ,so libraries are not necessary .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since
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centuries
libraries
have been in the service of people .These
libraries
are storehouse of
never ending
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knowledge known as
books
.Some people consider that we can do away with traditional
libraries
because technology has given us the facility of virtual or online
libraries
.But I believe that even though technology has
lessen
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our need to go to the
libraries
, our traditional
libraries
can never become unnecessary There is no doubt that today most students try to find
easier
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way to study and so that they look for some information from online websites .To add
this
way
more
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cheaper
also
for example
if you want to read something you can search online and read anywhere.
However
one should keep in mind that a person goes to a library not only to search and get information from
books
but
also
to sit and study there. The ambience and the peaceful and good atmosphere of the library help one to concentrate more on one's work and study .
Thus
libraries
never become unneeded . So their role is more important for society. Another vital point is that it is very difficult to always read
books
from the computer monitor. Traditional
books
also
can be accessed only by those who are computer screen .
for instance
this
also
causes some health problems .
To conclude
.No doubt today virtual
libraries
becoming be of the public eye but the importance of the
libraries
for their fundamental role cannot be put aside .So each library should provide good quality
with
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facilities for readers so
then
more and more people access them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessible information
  • online databases
  • e-books
  • educational websites
  • community centers
  • physical books
  • literacy programs
  • peer-reviewed resources
  • misleading information
  • digital divide
  • high-speed internet
  • underprivileged communities
  • custodians of culture
  • archival material
  • conducive environment
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