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You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen￾friend and say – when the best time to come is and why – what tourist atractions there are in your area – what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit

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Dear Marina, I love your response to my invitation .I am really glad you accept my proposal to come to Ukraine.As we both have summer vacation in June I think that's the best time to come to my country. I know you love to see waterfalls and beaches,so I have a list of places where we can visit .The most famous place is sunset beach and you going to love the bamboo falls in my city . We can enjoy one of our bucket list activities, scuba diving .We can enjoy the inside view of the sea and
also
 there are lots of game shows ,
such
 as ice hockey which is going to organize in the first week of June. Hope to see you soon. Your lovely Aman
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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