Space exploration is a luxury that we cannot afford. Instead of spending billions of dollars on space programs, governments should use this money to fight global problems such as poverty, disease, and climate change. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The government of developed countries have been spending billion worth of money to send mankind into
space
for
exploration
, and examination of the earth's mysterious surroundings.
Such
trips, though hold meaningful value to astronomers, cause controversy
due to
the trade-off against budget for treating problems in social, healthcare and environmental aspects. From my point of view, cosmic
exploration
is essential and investment-worthy;
however
, in times of crisis, any affair that directly affects the well-being of humans should be prioritized. On the one hand, it is important to stress that
space
trip for examination is indeed beneficial to both scientific research and people in the long run. What we experience on our Earth so far is just the tip of an iceberg - the universe,
hence
there is no guarantee that we won't suffer from another hit capable of bringing extinction to mankind.
Therefore
,
findings
from
space
exploration
provide scientists with more knowledge needed to predict and possibly resolve the dilemma.
On the other hand
,
such
findings
require time and resources to
further
analyse before any useful or establishable conclusion can be made, plus, results can take up to a decade to reach normal people.
Therefore
, the benefits of the programs may happen far in the future but investment in
space
programs does take up free cash available to spend more on battling other more realistic issues that matter to the society at the moment. In times of crisis, it is more important to prioritize investment to tackle social issues because cosmic
findings
need humans in existence to prove their value, so humans should be protected from harm before we get to the stage of
utilization
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of more
space
findings
. Adding to the point, in some cases,
space
operations seem to be a competition of power between wealthy nations rather than for scientific purposes.
This
left developing countries, which mainly suffered from social issues, underinvested.
Moreover
, budgets for
such
plan
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are
also
susceptible to embezzlement because they are normally hefty and the results can be vague/of little value,
thus
reports can be easily altered to make way for corrupted behaviours. In conclusion, both investment activities are crucial, amid the scepticism of the need for
space
exploration
. For both to coexist effectively, political leaders should prioritize budget social, and environmental problems were they to seriously assess where the real attention should be headed to.
Additionally
, they should make an effort to make add integrity to statement establishment and explains results, and application of cosmic knowledge in a way that attracts and interests non-scholars in the field, so that more people get to understand the need for
such
plan
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