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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she as asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say why you would like to go camping with your friend this summer write at least 150 words

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Dear Mojisola, I hope you're well. I'm just writing to give you some information about a camping holiday in summer. It is full of very interesting activities and you should try them. With your level of social interactions, you would enjoy yourself a lot. A camping holiday is all about social activities and a few adventurous activities which you would
also
 love. The safari ride is one of them, you should have an experience. It is full of excitement and suspense.
Also
, don't miss the campfire night the fireworks after are worth the late-night wait.
Although
, there are still some downsides of camping you should note. The Camp is always very cold at night so I advise you to bring some warm pyjamas with you.
Also
, not all the meals provided are to your palate so, bring a lot of snacks to avoid being hungry and tired As much as camping in summer can be full of fun and a good time to refresh, I would not be able to come with you because I have some assignments to submit at work during the summer
this
 period. I would love to hear about every fun activity and experience you had when you return. Yours Sincerely, Mariam
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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