The investment of Government into arts, such as music and theater is a waste of money

.The investment of

Government

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the Government

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into

arts

,

such

as music and theatre is a waste of

money

should Invest in public services

instead

of investing

such

an amount of capital in

arts

. I agree with

this

because there are a lot of things to invest in society rather than art,

for example

by building a lot of companies to create employment opportunities and providing more social amenities like good electricity supply and good roads.

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point will be

further

explained with relevant examples and logical conclusions in subsequent paragraphs.

Firstly

, investing in

arts

such

as music and theatre is a

wasting

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of

money

.

This

money

can easily be invested in something reasonable like building a company that can provide

job

opportunities for

job

seekers.

For example

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we have a lot of people moving around on a daily basis looking for

job

opportunities, investing

money

in a company will help them to get a

job

, and the company can

also

generate income for the government.

Secondly

,

instead

of the government investing in

arts

, they can invest much cash in social amenities that are very useful and make life easier for the people.

For example

, by having giving constant electricity supply, and good road.

This

will attract investors from different areas to come to

such

a place to Invest. When there is a good road and stable electricity supply it helps and promotes the development of an organization, and it's

also

another way to generate income that can benefit a society. In conclusion, investing in

arts

,

such

as theatre and music, is a waste of cash because

such

an amount of capital can be used for something reasonable.