Some people believe that studing at university or college is the best rout so sussessful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People

are different some of them like to continue their education

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on the other hand

they believe it is better to have a job after school directly, both said to have an advantage but studying is better for many reasons. First of all, a lot of

people

prefer studying

instead

of working early and I am one of them because, we think having a good degree and knowledge lets society respect you ,

second,

when someone has a Certificate easier to find a job in the perfect position with a large salary.

Finally

, studying is less difficult than working and more fun.

For example

, a student can study part-time and do what he wants after that. I am a student in college in the morning

also

I am working as a treader at night.

In contrast

, the public who want to work after graduation from school, In my ,opinion care about money more than a career.

In addition

, they want to become milliners as fast as they can. My older brother thinks like that but after he long time he

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people

luck was with them like many

people

in our world.

For instance

, Cristiano Ronaldo, Bill Gates, and others.

Therefore

, they think working is the best way to be successful.

However

, those who are hardworking and intelligent did not become rich or famous by chance. In conclusion, every person has his ambition so, to have a great career there is no specific way, but you have to work hard.