Some people believe that studing at university or college is the best rout so sussessful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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are different some of them like to continue their education

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they believe it is better to have a job after school directly, both said to have an advantage but studying is better for many reasons. First of all, a lot of

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prefer studying

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of working early and I am one of them because, we think having a good degree and knowledge lets society respect you ,

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when someone has a Certificate easier to find a job in the perfect position with a large salary.

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, studying is less difficult than working and more fun.

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, a student can study part-time and do what he wants after that. I am a student in college in the morning

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I am working as a treader at night.

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, the public who want to work after graduation from school, In my ,opinion care about money more than a career.

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, they want to become milliners as fast as they can. My older brother thinks like that but after he long time he

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people

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luck was with them like many

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in our world.

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, Cristiano Ronaldo, Bill Gates, and others.

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, they think working is the best way to be successful.

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, those who are hardworking and intelligent did not become rich or famous by chance. In conclusion, every person has his ambition so, to have a great career there is no specific way, but you have to work hard.