Some people believe that studing at university or college is the best rout so sussessful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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are different some of them like to continue their education

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they believe it is better to have a job after school directly, both said to have an advantage but studying is better for many reasons. First of all, a lot of

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prefer studying

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of working early and I am one of them because, we think having a good degree and knowledge lets society respect you ,

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when someone has a Certificate easier to find a job in the perfect position with a large salary.

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, studying is less difficult than working and more fun.

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, a student can study part-time and do what he wants after that. I am a student in college in the morning

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I am working as a treader at night.

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, the public who want to work after graduation from school, In my ,opinion care about money more than a career.

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, they want to become milliners as fast as they can. My older brother thinks like that but after he long time he

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people

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luck was with them like many

people

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in our world.

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, Cristiano Ronaldo, Bill Gates, and others.

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, they think working is the best way to be successful.

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, those who are hardworking and intelligent did not become rich or famous by chance. In conclusion, every person has his ambition so, to have a great career there is no specific way, but you have to work hard.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Some people believe that studing at university or college is the best rout so sussessful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

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