Topic1 Problems and solutions Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is irrefutable that currently

young

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generation

are

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pressurized by serious difficulties in terms of communal, educational and commercial

as well

as

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.

This

essay intends to analyze

cause

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the cause

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of these issues and suggest some

measure

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measures

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to alleviate the trouble Presently , a

condenserable

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condensable

amount of challenges prompt negative

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effects

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in

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on

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kid's life .

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with

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a issue which is

lack

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a lack

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of competitiveness with

other child

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another child

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. Youngsters are

also

required for being good at

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every aspect of life . That's

way

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why

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They have to attend the most prestigious school

Although

it isn't

match

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a match

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for their skills .

Due to

presence

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the presence

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of extra lessons , They cannot flourish their inborn talent .

In addition

, communal and commercial issues cause them to get stressed. Juveniles face

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a large dilemma. Because of parental force , they

loose

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desire

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the desire

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of adopting global culture.

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, Juniors are restricted

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to

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only conventional culture .

Furthermore

, today young generation become aware

state-of-the-art

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of state-of-the-art

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technologies. It is one of the most critical

issue

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among them . It is difficult to solve these troubles .

However

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there are some

solution

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solutions

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for

this

.

Firstly

parents have to alter worldwide and they must require

outcome

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outcomes

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which their

kid

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kids

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can do .

Secondly

, Child is motivated and provided with enough time by their parents.

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Young generation must be taught friendship and competition . They must not participate in

compition

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competition

for winning ,

Othervise

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main goal

from

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competition must be to get experience. To draw a conclusion, there is no doubt that youngsters have got difficulty.

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, if parents and

minor

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minors

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want , they can overcome these issues. Unless they take

measure

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measures

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, these troubles will root again