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Topic1 Problems and solutions Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

#topic #children #pressures #perspectives #measures
It is irrefutable that currently
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 generation
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 pressurized by serious difficulties in terms of communal, educational and commercial
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.
This
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the cause
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 of these issues and suggest some
measure
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measures
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 to alleviate the trouble Presently , a
condenserable
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condensable
 amount of challenges prompt negative
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in
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 kid's life .
Besides
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a issue which is
lack
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 of competitiveness with
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another child
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. Youngsters are
also
 required for being good at
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every aspect of life . That's
way
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why
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 They have to attend the most prestigious school
Although
 it isn't
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 for their skills .
Due to
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 of extra lessons , They cannot flourish their inborn talent .
In addition
, communal and commercial issues cause them to get stressed. Juveniles face
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a large dilemma. Because of parental force , they
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desire
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 of adopting global culture.
As a consequence
, Juniors are restricted
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 only conventional culture .
Furthermore
, today young generation become aware
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of state-of-the-art
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 technologies. It is one of the most critical
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among them . It is difficult to solve these troubles .
However
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 there are some
solution
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solutions
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 for
this
.
Firstly
 parents have to alter worldwide and they must require
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outcomes
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 which their
kid
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kids
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 can do .
Secondly
, Child is motivated and provided with enough time by their parents.
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 Young generation must be taught friendship and competition . They must not participate in
compition
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competition
 for winning ,
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 main goal
from
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 competition must be to get experience. To draw a conclusion, there is no doubt that youngsters have got difficulty.
However
 , if parents and
minor
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minors
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want , they can overcome these issues. Unless they take
measure
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, these troubles will root again
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