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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

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It is true that there is an increasing number of
fathers
 quitting their jobs in order to look after their kids as opposed to working out. There are many reasons behind
this
 trend and I do believe its advantages outweigh
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the disadvatages
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disadvatages
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disadvantages
. There are many factors that account for the rapid growth of the number of
fathers
 who stay at home to give more care to their children.
Firstly
,
the
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masculine love makes boys strong and brave. The character of
fathers
 seems more tough than
mother
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mothers
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, so
fathers
 are able to give different education to mothers which can make their boys become tough guys.
Secondly
, in some families, the work abilities of wives are better than husbands,
that
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 is why many
females
 go out to work in some households. It can make great profits
to
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 a family.
For example
, more and more
females
 have appeared in the Forbes rich list.
That is
 an affirmation of the working abilities of women. There are several reasons making
this
 trend a positive one. To start with, it can improve the social status of women considerably. Women are always inferior to men in common thought, but
this
 situation broke up traditional thought, which can encourage more
females
 to realize their social value.
Furthermore
, if
females
 start to take part in jobs, more and more female talents would be poured out, which enables some companies to run in an optimistic way. In conclusion, people’s lives and jobs would be greatly affected by the alter characters in
fathers
 and mothers. I think it is a healthy
trendency
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tendency
.
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