The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant
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The two maps compare the pathway of a town health centre in 2017 and the year 2010.
Overall
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,it can be seen that there was a significant change within the given period.
However
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,the ring line, hospital way and city lane were not reconstructed. In the year 2017,the eastern part of the downtown hospital was empty with no structure.The facility roadway has three bus stops on each side.The staff and public pickups were situated at the eastern unit of the geography. The ring route and the city way were located in the northern and the southern region respectively,
whereas
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the town clinic and the facility subway were at the centre.
In contrast
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,in 2010, the public car lane has been removed from its initial position to the eastern measure of the building.The space for the car stations was used for just one vehicle stop on the left and a staff car park on the right.Two roundabouts were strategically positioned in the middle of the design which joins the ring line, public auto lane, worker's pickups and the bus stop together. Contrastingly,few structures remained the same within the given period.The ring track was located in the northern region of the blueprint, the health facility was at the centre
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the hospital was situated in the southern sector with the city subway located at the southeast of the design.
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  • infrastructure, development, expansion, accessibility, comparative analysis, layout, direction, emergency services, facilities, pedestrian paths, urban development, strategic planning
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