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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent eleswhere. To what extent to you agree with this veiw?

#people #government #money #arts #eleswhere #veiw
Nowadays most of the public sectors are investing to improve the public services across their countries,
therefore
 some of those investments improved the health care in some places, and the rest was spent in making better infrastructure
such
 as roads, transportation and parks,
however
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 others believe that their no attention for people needs and they just focused on the arts and how to get more visitors from around the world.
Therefore
, the recent investment in some countries targeted summer activities where they can gain more profit and tourists by having more places for activities and arts, without considering the needs for education and health of their population. in conclusion, the government sector should focus more on the daily needs and main sectors and serve the hall country,
instead
 of looking for one area.
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