The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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. The line charts illustrate the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the number of
hours
per week dedicated to domestic work from 1920 to 2019 in a country.
Overall
, it is noticeable that when the proportion of households with electrical appliances increase
, the amount of time spent doing housework Change the verb form
increases
decrease
.
Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
According to
the first chart, there was an upward trend in the ownership of washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. In 1920, almost nobody bought refrigerators; however
, they were the most owned appliance from 2000 to 2019 at 100% just the same as vacuum
Correct article usage
the vacuum
cleaners’
rate during the same years Change noun form
cleaners
although
it started at 30%. Furthermore
, washing machine ownership started at the highest of all at 40% then
it fluctuated until it peaked at around 60% by the end of the period to be the lowest owned of all.
Regarding the second chart, the amount of time spent doing housework showed a downward trend. It started at a large number of 50 hours
and then
it dramatically dropped to only 10 hours
in 2019, but the trend remained steady at almost 15 hours
from 1980 to 2000Submitted by mai.nabeil46 on
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