The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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. The line charts illustrate the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the number of

hours

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per week dedicated to domestic work from 1920 to 2019 in a country.

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, it is noticeable that when the proportion of households with electrical appliances

increase

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increases

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, the amount of time spent doing housework

decrease

Correct subject-verb agreement

decreases

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According to

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the first chart, there was an upward trend in the ownership of washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. In 1920, almost nobody bought refrigerators;

however

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, they were the most owned appliance from 2000 to 2019 at 100% just the same as

vacuum

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the vacuum

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cleaners’

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cleaners

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rate during the same years

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it started at 30%.

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, washing machine ownership started at the highest of all at 40%

then

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it fluctuated until it peaked at around 60% by the end of the period to be the lowest owned of all. Regarding the second chart, the amount of time spent doing housework showed a downward trend. It started at a large number of 50

hours

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and

then

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it dramatically dropped to only 10

hours

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in 2019, but the trend remained steady at almost 15

hours

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from 1980 to 2000

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

household appliances
time-efficient
labour-saving devices
technological innovations
ownership rate
housework chores
domestic workload
automation
advancements
trend analysis
societal shifts
economic impact
durability
lifespan of appliances
maintenance
historical comparison
time allocation
drudgery reduction
energy consumption
disruption in trends

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