The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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. The line charts illustrate the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the number of

hours

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per week dedicated to domestic work from 1920 to 2019 in a country.

Overall

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, it is noticeable that when the proportion of households with electrical appliances

increase

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increases

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, the amount of time spent doing housework

decrease

Correct subject-verb agreement

decreases

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According to

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the first chart, there was an upward trend in the ownership of washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners. In 1920, almost nobody bought refrigerators;

however

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, they were the most owned appliance from 2000 to 2019 at 100% just the same as

vacuum

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the vacuum

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cleaners’

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cleaners

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rate during the same years

although

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it started at 30%.

Furthermore

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, washing machine ownership started at the highest of all at 40%

then

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it fluctuated until it peaked at around 60% by the end of the period to be the lowest owned of all. Regarding the second chart, the amount of time spent doing housework showed a downward trend. It started at a large number of 50

hours

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and

then

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it dramatically dropped to only 10

hours

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in 2019, but the trend remained steady at almost 15

hours

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from 1980 to 2000

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

household appliances
time-efficient
labour-saving devices
technological innovations
ownership rate
housework chores
domestic workload
automation
advancements
trend analysis
societal shifts
economic impact
durability
lifespan of appliances
maintenance
historical comparison
time allocation
drudgery reduction
energy consumption
disruption in trends

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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?