Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
The packaging of
goods
is becoming debatable. In recent times, there is the perception of people that both manufacturers and supermarkets are in the proper place of decreasing the cost of goods
packaging while
some are of the opinion that consumers
should purchase goods
with lesser packaging. This
essay will analyse both views and my opinions will be given with reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, producers of goods
as well as
supermarkets should put the interest of the consumers
their priority by reducing the cost of packaging their goods
, because, consumers
will make or bring down the efforts of the producers in the sense that the patronage of the consumer of goods
will determine whether the goods
will continue to be in an existence or not. For instance
, the production of bathing soap which , although
effective, has expensive packaging thereby reducing its patronage by the populace will definitely affect the producers because the marketing will be slow. In my opinion, goods
should be packaged well in order to increase their shelf life and then
improve their uniqueness, on the other hand
, Having the interest of the customers should not be underrated.
However
, cutting one's coat according to
one's pocket is important, people should purchase the goods
which they can afford in packaging because, being contented with what you have is important as not everyone can afford expensive things, going for lesser packaging will be safe them of stress and prevent unnecessary pressure that some goods
that have better packaging. In my own perspective, goods
the amount of packaging of goods
should be reduced so as to increase patronage by the customers thereby enhancing productivity.For example
, I went to the market to get some bananas at the rate of 500 nairas, the same quantity of bananas would be sold at the rate of 1000 naira in a supermarket called ShopRite just because of packaging, I saved money and unnecessary pressure by going for what I can afford.
In conclusion, both the supermarkets and the manufacturers should make the interest of their consumers
their priority in order to improve productivity and to enable them to stay in business,,
Change the punctuation
apply
likewise
the customers too should go for the Add a comma
,likewise
goods
with lesser packaging which they can afford and are readily available.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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