Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary problems should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally, it has been discovered that most manufactured food and drink products contain an elevated level of

sugar

in them which causes numerous health challenges. I support the notion

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increasing the prices of sugary products to encourage people to build healthy

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based on two reasons.

Firstly

, research shows people with high

sugar

intake are more susceptible to diabetic mellitus.

Also

, they have severe migraine in their 50s and above.

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, a research carried out by the Research

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of Atlanta studied 50 sample

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selected , from

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sample size 45 had diabetes mellitus after ten years and

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resulted from their high

sugar

intake linking diabetic mellitus directly to

sugar

.

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, history gathered from hospitals around the city of Lagos, Nigeria, reveals that most

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that presented with migraine had a history of high

sugar

content in their preferred meal.

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, my uncle of blessed memory had a severe migraine

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which he passed on in his sleep. I remember clearly how exciting it was visiting him as sweet meals and drinks were assured, unknowing to us a steady and direct link to an early grave for him. He was a man who was quite poor but would still afford varieties of sweets because they were very affordable despite his financial constraints. Under these, circumstances, I reiterate the idea of increasing the cost of these sugary meals and drinks to reduce the amount that would be consumed.