An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operations to change their looks? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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decide to get operated for aesthetic purposes. The reasons are most public figures want to become more famous and for the purpose of looking younger than their age.

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is a negative development as several

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outcomes have been reported.

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, the main reason individuals opt for invasive procedures like liposuction is because they either want to maintain their fame or more popular. The cost of these surgeries

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affordable and they feel the benefit from

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action is worth the pay.

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few months, a popular actress got a million followers

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to the one and

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million followers she had on her social media

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of the hip enlargement she did

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year.

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, another motive

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undergoing

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is to look younger than they should. It is normal for the skin especially the face to get wrinkled as they grow older,

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, all sorts of things like reconstruction of the nose, under

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of the lips are done to look smaller than the current age.

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,

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innovation has not been beneficial in most cases. There have been reports of failed surgeries which

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to complications. One clear example is the story that went viral online, where the fats deposited in the buttocks shifted leading to

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shape in the area.

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, the products introduced into the body

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been found to cause cancer. The substance mixed are being studied and are found to have side effects. In conclusion, individuals decide to get operations for beautification because of fame and to look younger with lots of side effects. Policies can be made by the government to discourage or ban

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procedure among people.