Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Trees

in the

city

are playing important roles

such

as making their landscape better. Some people believe that if there

is

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any empty spaces in the

city

,

trees

should be planted

while

other say that building more houses there would be a better idea. I completely disagree with

this

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idea of having more houses in a

vacent

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vacant

area of

city

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the city

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. Building new

facilities

in the margin space of

city

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the city

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might worsen the environment. If the numbers of buildings and houses increase, population density increases as well.

A

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result of

this

situation, the

amount

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of

electricties

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electricity

electricities

that emits carbon dioxide

significantly

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boosted. The air of

city

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the city

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would be polluted,

this

would risk the people’s lungs.

However

,

trees

could keep the place to be eco-friendly. If there are

trees

planted in

margin

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ares

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areas

of the

city

, it would prevent the

city

from being overpopulated.

Secondly

, the

city

no

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longer a safe space for

kids

and their

parents

. As

the

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more

facilities

are extended, there is no doubt that

city

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would be

a

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busy.

Consequently

, the number of vehicles on the street drastically increases and thereby it would not be a safe place for

kids

.

For instance

,

parents

have to pay extra attention when they are walking with their

kids

.

This

must be very

stressing

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for

parents

especially those who have more than one

children

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. In conclusion, some claims that the

city

should

more

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have more

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facilities

in the vacant area

whereas

, others believe that planting

trees

in

such

places would be way better. I disagree with the idea of filling the blanks with more

facilities

. The reasons are it would affect the environment negatively and the

parents

would get a huge pressure to walk in the

city

with their

kids

.