Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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in the

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are playing important roles

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as making their landscape better. Some people believe that if there

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any empty spaces in the

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,

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should be planted

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other say that building more houses there would be a better idea. I completely disagree with

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idea of having more houses in a

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vacant

area of

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city

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facilities

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in the margin space of

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might worsen the environment. If the numbers of buildings and houses increase, population density increases as well.

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situation, the

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of

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electricity

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that emits carbon dioxide

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boosted. The air of

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city

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would be polluted,

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would risk the people’s lungs.

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,

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could keep the place to be eco-friendly. If there are

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planted in

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of the

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, it would prevent the

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from being overpopulated.

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, the

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longer a safe space for

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and their

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more

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are extended, there is no doubt that

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would be

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busy.

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, the number of vehicles on the street drastically increases and thereby it would not be a safe place for

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parents

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have to pay extra attention when they are walking with their

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must be very

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for

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especially those who have more than one

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. In conclusion, some claims that the

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should

more

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have more

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facilities

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in the vacant area

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, others believe that planting

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in

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places would be way better. I disagree with the idea of filling the blanks with more

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. The reasons are it would affect the environment negatively and the

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would get a huge pressure to walk in the

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with their

kids

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.