The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram highlights the
process
by which fuel is produced from corn. There are approximately nine steps involved in the
process
, from starting to storing corn to transporting
step
.
The first
step
is that corn is stored and
the following
step
is that it is milled
following
this
, an amount of water is added to the
process
, in order to be cooked for two days which is the third longest time among the whole circle. When the cooking
step
has been finished, it is
then
fermented which is the longest of all steps. After being fermented, it is
then
separated and
then
the liquid
process
is started at which point it is
solid
Correct article usage
a solid
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by-product by way of purifying ethanol for five hours, the amount of time which is the second longest and
then
it is stored for an unknown time and the
last
step
is that It is transported.
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