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List of causes and effects of global warming. Often that might slow or stop the problem associated with him. #list #effects

#list #effects
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Global warming is increasing day by day
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 human activities on Earth
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 as deforestation and the smoke of factories and vehicles into the air. It leads to temperature rises on the planet and affects the
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. I will discuss more in detail about causes and effects in a forthcoming paragraph. To commence with, deforestation is the fancy root of
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 problem. People are cutting trees for their needs and the level of co2 has been increasing dramatically that rising the condition level on Earth and melting the polar ice caps which is the main reason for floods and drought. Most of the people lost their homes and face financial issues
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 as lack of food.
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, mill and automobile vehicles used cheap oils that exhaust fumes into the air. It increased the greenhouse gases in the air that are damaging the
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. The
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 protects humans from ultraviolet rays from the sun.
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 deprecation leads to human chronic diseases
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 as cancer. There are numerous ways by which are can control levels of heat on the surface. By Coordination between the government and individuals. The authorities implement laws against emissions from the industry. industry must be constructed away from the residential area. And invest in renewable energy
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 as solar, wind or water.
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, greenhouse gases have been increasing
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 human acts
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 as deforestation which cause the rise of the globe's warmth and damage 8i the
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. It can be controlled by planting trees and using renewable materials.
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