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Today, more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays more individuals postpone their
marriage
 and make up their family until their thirties.
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 and down sides of
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 decision. Being aware of your personality and your needs are fundamental to building a successful
marriage
. Most
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people must shoulder the pressure of their studies and the crisis of achieving their carrier goals in the age range of 18 to 29 so
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they can't spend time as needed to get to know what they desire in their personal life.
Therefore
 getting married in
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 4th decade of their life gives them sufficient time to know themselves
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 enough to find a better match than in their 20s.
In addition
, managing the probable problems in a
marriage
 requires some experience and a spirit which you can't gain in your early adulthood.
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 gives you the opportunity to understand
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 and emotions of your partner in a more effective way. That's perhaps the reason that scientists claim you will have to ruin at least seven relationships before you become mature enough to become capable of creating a happy coupling.
On the other hand
, the older you get the more troubles you will encounter in the case of having healthy offspring. The results of
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recent research show that 35% of children born in their mothers' mid-thirty suffer from less intelligence and
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 higher risk of cardiovascular and blood disease. In conclusion,
although
 late
marriage
 has its own disadvantages, we can't ignore that all the bright sides weigh more
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • matrimonial timing
  • fertility issues
  • career-oriented
  • financial security
  • societal norms
  • generational divide
  • personal fulfillment
  • personality development
  • biological clock
  • extended adolescence
  • family planning
  • child rearing
  • socioeconomic factors
  • traditional milestones
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