The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph explains how many tourists visited a certain Caribbean
island
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from 2010 to 2017 (in millions). Moving to the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on the
island
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and on a cruise ship, in 2010, the former was well over half a million,
whereas
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those of the latter were lower than half (just under 0.5).The
number
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of
visitors
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on cruise ships saw a gradual increase by 0.5, and in the subsequent years, there was a significant growth to 2 m, in 2017, after a slight dip in 2012 and returning to the prior level.
However
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, figures for
visitors
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staying on the
island
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, over the next five years, enjoyed a substantial increase to 1.5, in 2015, followed by a minimal decrease to nearly 1 m, in 2016, and again became to 1.5, in 2017.
According to
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the total
number
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of
visitors
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, it stood at 1m, in 2010, after which it marginally rose, over the following seven years.
Overall
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, as can be seen, the
number
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of total
visitors
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soared, and
visitors
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would more like to stay on a cruise ship than that of staying on the
island
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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