The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
This
line chart depicts the proportion of unworked people in two countries : the USA and Japan
during the period 1993 - 1999.
It is clear from the graph that there is a significant difference between the mentioned cities in unwork people percentage. There is a noticeable decrease in the USA while
there is a significant increase in Japan
.
According to
what is shown , the US outperformed Japan
in workforce ratio with 7% in 1993 but it declined gradually till it reach 4.2% by 1999. On the other hand
, Japan
had 2.3% in 19993 then
it climbed to its peak at 4.6% by 1999. Moreover
, after 1998, both cities have equivalent unemployment rates.
To sum up
, we could conclude from the figure that Japan
exceed the USA in unworked people rate.Submitted by miss.t.z on
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