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It is important for individuals and countries to think about future rather than present. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued
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 relevant for
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 and countries to think about their
future
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 rather than the present. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss why I agree with
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 statement.
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, thinking of the
future
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 often help you to achieve your goal and give you a pathway to follow in your present.
This
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 applies either to countries or
people
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. To go more in-depth
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 relation to
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 when you prepare yourself or your
country
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makes
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make
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 a plan thinking on the
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 that would help them to obtain their goals in long-term projects.
For example
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,if someone wants to
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study for
a master's degree in the
future
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 have to prepare in the present moment the paperwork to apply for that.
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, if a
country
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 needs to get more funds for healthcare have to prepare in the present moment how it will achieve that funds.
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, being prepared for the
future
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give
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gives
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 you a sense of stability and helps you to achieve goals.
Secondly
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,
people
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 or countries concentrating on the
future
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 can lead them to succeed
on
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 different projects they have decided to take
.
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on.
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 Why
this
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 can lead you to the success of a
country
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 or person? The answer is simple just you will be prepared for what is coming and you will make it happen.
For example
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, if you want to buy a house in the
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 you have to start to save money in the present moment, so that can lead you to success or if a
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 has a project to improve education they have to think of the
future
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 to make that project to happen. In conclusion, some
people
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 believe government or
people
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 have to focus more on the
future
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 rather than the present. In my opinion, I think you have to focus on the
future
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 to achieve things and
that is
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 apply to a person or a
country
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.
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