Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and polution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What ather measures do you think might be effective.

Nowadays,
Pollution
and traffic are everywhere. It is hard to find a city without
pollution
and traffic. Some
people
think that raising in
petrol
rate will prevent
this
problem. In my opinion, I do not agree with
such
a statement. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall discuss and delve deeper into the topic.
Firstly
, These days almost every individual had
vehicles
like two and four-wheelers.
Moreover
, the Usage and importing of oils are increased. Those
vehicles
exhausted harmful gases into the air,which will cause air
pollution
and it is harmful to humans. Some Schools of
people
argue that it can prevent by increasing
petrol
rates.
However
, those who are having
vehicles
won't think about the price.
Likewise
, it won't change anything for
pollution
too.
For example
, those who are working for multinational companies those
people
have high salaries they did not think about the cost.
Secondly
, Raising the oil cost is not a good idea and it will affect the poor
people
.
For instance
, Those who sell their product on
vehicles
on the road, will not be able to spend money on
petrol
which leads to spending their days without food.
In addition
, some individuals lose their lives.
Moreover
, some individuals spend their money on
petrol
by reducing some groceries which is not a good move.
Lastly
, the air is polluting in several ways,
such
as chemical factories and industrial units etc. In conclusion, Increasing in oil rate is not at all a good idea.I totally disagree with the above-mentioned statement.
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