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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and polution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What ather measures do you think might be effective.

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Nowadays,
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 and traffic are everywhere. It is hard to find a city without
pollution
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 and traffic. Some
people
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 think that raising in
petrol
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 rate will prevent
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 problem. In my opinion, I do not agree with
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 a statement. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall discuss and delve deeper into the topic.
Firstly
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, These days almost every individual had
vehicles
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 like two and four-wheelers.
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, the Usage and importing of oils are increased. Those
vehicles
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 exhausted harmful gases into the air,which will cause air
pollution
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 and it is harmful to humans. Some Schools of
people
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 argue that it can prevent by increasing
petrol
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 rates.
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, those who are having
vehicles
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 won't think about the price.
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, it won't change anything for
pollution
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 too.
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, those who are working for multinational companies those
people
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 have high salaries they did not think about the cost.
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, Raising the oil cost is not a good idea and it will affect the poor
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.
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, Those who sell their product on
vehicles
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 on the road, will not be able to spend money on
petrol
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 which leads to spending their days without food.
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, some individuals lose their lives.
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, some individuals spend their money on
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 by reducing some groceries which is not a good move.
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, the air is polluting in several ways,
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 as chemical factories and industrial units etc. In conclusion, Increasing in oil rate is not at all a good idea.I totally disagree with the above-mentioned statement.
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