Some people think that sharing information freely will benefit in scientific research, business and academic world. However, others think some information is too important or too valuable to be shared. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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I'd like to talk about a
business
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which I know about a very successful
business
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about clothes and perfume
business
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and my friend
this
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is my friend's
business
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and he she was she is very experienced in it and she knows about all of the businesses secrets and she read a lot of books about
business
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how to run the field and my friend is very experience it and she can well
organized
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organize
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their own
business
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and it was a close it's easy clothes. And is there a lot of clothes people want how to wear and as I remembered
it
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apply
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a couple of months ago my friends begin to run to her
business
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with friends and it's her friends and say it was very enjoyable and a very yes, very enjoyable in
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business
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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