In many countries smoking is now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the present world, most of them are addicted to smoking because of work pressure. Even in the common, they started smoking. I agreed with the statement that smoking should be banned in public
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, smoking become fashionable for most youngsters which effect their health.
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, smoking is one of the major problems with teenagers which they will face issues in the future.
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, I recommend not being addicted to bad habits but need to look for alternatives
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as doing exercise or walking around nearby public
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which helps refresh you with peace of mind.
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, as technology grows and with the hectic schedule on the weekdays there is a lot of pressure on our minds. In order to get rid of that we should not habituate to bad habits like smoking and drinking.
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, taking a cup of coffee, doing yoga or chatting with your beloved colleagues will relax your mental stress.
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we can overcome to avoid smoking . To summarize , if you are smoking for fashion or in metal stress does not impact others by doing
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in public
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. Government should ban
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to help their families for health . Smoking should stop in most of
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houses and keep a zone which not impact others who don't have an interest in smoking.
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to avoid
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need to pass a law against smoking in public which is used by many people and reduces the problems faced in many countries where it helps to provide the right benefits to the country
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