You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. You face some problems with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter • Details about hotel booking • Problems that you faced there • Gives the distance to the travel agent so that such problems are not repeated
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to provide an update about the recent overseas holiday planned through your travel agency. We booked a two-day, three-night stay in Western Inn inside the Grand Canyon National Park from 10th May 2023 to 13th May 2023. We booked the premium suite, however
facilities were far from premium.
Let me explain the two major problems faced during our stay there. First,
air-conditioning was broken, and the manager couldn’t have it fixed or move us to another room. Second,
for the morning breakfast
we were asked to pay, Add a comma
breakfast,
although
it was specifically mentioned it's
complementary.
Could you please look into the above problems at the earliest by reimbursing me for the breakfast cost, and making sure that hotel bookings are portrayed the way Wrong verb form
it was
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
exists
, and not Correct subject-verb agreement
exist
otherwise
. I am highly disappointed with your agency's services and would be hesitant to take your service in the future.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully
HarshSubmitted by harshdpatel34 on
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