You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. You face some problems with the hotel booked through your travel agent. Write a letter to your travel agent. In your letter • Details about hotel booking • Problems that you faced there • Gives the distance to the travel agent so that such problems are not repeated

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to provide an update about the recent overseas holiday planned through your travel agency. We booked a two-day, three-night stay in Western Inn inside the Grand Canyon National Park from 10th May 2023 to 13th May 2023. We booked the premium suite,

however

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facilities were far from premium. Let me explain the two major problems faced during our stay there.

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air-conditioning was broken, and the manager couldn’t have it fixed or move us to another room.

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for the morning

breakfast

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breakfast,

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we were asked to pay,

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it was specifically mentioned

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complementary. Could you please look into the above problems at the earliest by reimbursing me for the breakfast cost, and making sure that hotel bookings are portrayed the way

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exists

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, and not

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. I am highly disappointed with your agency's services and would be hesitant to take your service in the future. Looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully Harsh

harshdpatel34Sat May 13 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

Address all the points mentioned in the prompt to improve task achievement.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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