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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the average amount of
rainfall
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 in a whole
year
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 between two cities Woodsville and Blacksburg. The
overall
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rainfall
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 amount appears higher in Woodsville most of the
year
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 compared to
Blacksboro
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. Generally,
Blacksboro
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's
rainfall
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 rate is pretty low ,especially in the middle and end of the
year
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 May, July, Aug, Sep, and Oct.  In Jan, Aug, Oct, Nov, and Dec the average
rainfall
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 is nearly doubled in Woodsville.
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, in other months the numbers were notably higher by an average of 1.5 to 2 inches compared to a low number of
Blacksboro
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.  In Feb,
however
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, the average
rainfall
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 was identical and rather similar in months
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 as July and Sep, where the former was higher by only half of an inch,
while
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 the latter by 1.25 inches. Meanwhile,
Blacksboro
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rainfall
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's rate is significantly higher at the beginning of the
year
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 primarily in Jan and Feb.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, year, blacksboro with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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