Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, world populations are increasingly moving from rural to urban

areas

because

of

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living in a city

provide

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provides

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more

opportunities

and advantages compared to

live

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living

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in a village. I partially agree with

this

statement,

due to

the fact that both

areas

provide the resident with diverse

opportunities

. To commence with, there are numerous reasons why big

cities

offer a large number of

benefits

as compared to life on the downside.

Firstly

, the developed

cities

provide better education for students.

For instance

, a recent survey has revealed that students who were educated in the city showed a better performance in national exams

while

those who lived in the countryside couldn't prepare efficiently

due to

lack of facilities.

Secondly

,

cities

offer greater

of

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job’s

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opportunities

,

that is

why highly qualified

people

are interested in moving to big

cities

for jobs and more

opportunities

.

Thirdly

, living in

cities

provides

the

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metropolitan land

such

as supermarkets,

hospital

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hospitals

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, education institutes and convenient transport.

Hence

, it is explicit that living in

cities

provide

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great

benefits

,

however

, it is not healthy.

For example

, recent research has examined the lifestyles of

people

who live in different

areas

and concluded that those who live in a rural area eat much healthier than residents of an urban area because the food of

countryside

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the countryside

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are

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mostly natural and organic.

Moreover

, living in

cities

sometimes makes

people

suffer from pollutants because of a pack of

people

, traffic pollutants and dusty air from the building of construction.

To conclude

, it can be clearly seen that living in a city and in a rural area both

comprises

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merits and drawbacks.

Cities

and rural

areas

provide different aspects of

benefits

. I

am not totally agree

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do not totally agree

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that living in

cities

offer

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offers

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greater

benefits

. It is up to individuals to choose a way to live their lives.