Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

Shopping is the initial part of our

life

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to

fulfill

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our necessities. Buying things online,

such

as hard-copy materials, air tickets and staple food, is becoming more and more rewarding. In my point of view, I do believe that online shopping is more beneficial than

offline

shopping.

Brick-and-mortar

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store

is the conventional one that applies for

customers

to come directly to the

store

and give them more chances to elevate the things that they want to need, which means they need a lot of time to choose and pick the items that they really want to buy.

However

, it is not sufficient enough for

customers

if they want to buy air tickets because they have to be in line and

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buying books in a flea market as a part of an

offline

store

would be tiring because the sellers and

customers

must search the books from beneath of the books and make a bargain.

Otherwise

, online shopping is the best option for

customers

in terms of time-consuming. We can shop for anything through our

gadget

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without hassle. Unlike

offline

stores, the products that we could get did not meet the expectation of

customers

,

for

instance

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fresh products

such

as vegetables and fruit. It seems to be bruised easier especially if the

store

was not having

a

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good packaging and

delivering

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. Economic analysts state that online shoppers seem to be more common than

few

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decades before. It

because

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of the time-consuming that we need

are

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less than

its

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on brick-and-mortar

store

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stores

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. In conclusion, in my point of view, I do believe that online shopping is more beneficial than

offline

stores. It is because of the time-management that I have to make properly and for some products it is damageable for buying them via online stores.