The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.
The maps compare the Norbition industrial area now and the planned future development of the site.
Overall
, the industrial area will usher in some changes and has also
seen the addition of new facilities such
as shops, a medical centre
, a playground and a school.
Lying north of the city centre
, a road will expand and the original river will be divided into two halves. The initial factories are reconstructed into housings and their geographical location has undergone slight changes. Shops and a new medical centre
will be added on the left and right sides of the city centre
separately. On the northwest side of the centre
, the new load will be set in the future. The farmland will be established in the top right-hand corner of the city centre
.
Finally
, the factory on the eastern edge of the area will be transformed into a school and the new playground will be built in the northern part of the middle entrance which was connecting the school and the central road.Submitted by 1053018224 on
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