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You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend's belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited In your letter include Why you are writing What you've been doing since you last spoke together Apoligize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Jhon, I'
m
 writing to let you know that, on your
last
 visit to my home town, you left some of your personal items in my place. I'd like to return those belongings back to you. Since our
last
 meet-up, lots of things have happened. Namely, I successfully finished my master's and became the batch top as well. I am no longer working as bank a clerk now. When I finished my education, I got an executive-level job offer from a multinational company. They've hired me as a top-level manager to overlook marketing operations.
Due to
 us not having a chit-chat for a long time, I don't know how are you doing right now, but I hope you are alive and kicking well! I had your stuff with me for more than two years and don't think of me as a common thief, thinking that I kept your things. I'
m
 really sorry it took
this
 long even to respond to you and couldn't return what's yours .Actually, I'
m
 keeping your stuff as a consignment. I'll be couriering the stuff via air mail and you hopefully receive them by the end of April. I'
m
 hoping to meet you very soon! Sincerely, Devin
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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