A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/ She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday  Describe some possible disadvantages  Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Jhon, I hope you are doing well! I'

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delighted to hear that you are going on a camping trip and as per your

last

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letter you wanted me to share some of my thoughts with you right ? I know for a fact that you're going to enjoy

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vacation so much. I'

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suggesting you

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consider

about

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going to Ella

falls

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Falls

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. There are

lot

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a lot

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of sceneries to be observed on top of the rock. After you climb to the peak,

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you

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can breathe some fresh air. I

heared

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heard

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that you are planning to go with a group of your office buddies, That exposure will help to increase the team bond since you guys are working in the same company. Since I explained

about

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some benefits

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camping, let me share

you

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with you

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some things that you need to keep your eye out for. There will be many leeches in the forest, so pack your bags with some high boots.

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major drawback is the load that you have to carry all the way up. So, make sure to pack light and with essentials. As you already know I'

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an expert on camping and I'

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available

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summer, if you want a helping hand I'

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more than happy to join your small band of campers.

Sicerely

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Sincerely

, Devin

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

217 words

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